Planescape comic - strip 12

the plot thickens, i like how the story is fleshing out but so far the only real detail that kinda grags it down is the use of pantomime images, i think that in a medium where dialogue has to be succint and punchy these are out of place, unless the pantomime is the manner in which you are conveying your story, aside from that i think the lack of panels and all the empty areas of the pages might be the root of some people's critiscism.